Wednesday, January 17, 2007

80's wanna-be


Fred just watched one too many saturday morning cartoons.

3 comments:

Dani said...

This is cute, but I wish there was more. And I think the illustration can be more effective without having to tell your audience what is happening with the type. With all the cartoons I watched as a kid, I'm surprised that I didn't turn into a Smurf myself.

Manelle said...

Fun character, very cute. Can you make is say what you want to without words? Or make the text somehow part of the illustration?

Mike Laughead said...

I love mixing type and image in an illo, but the type looks thrown on in this one. This image bothers me because it lacks finess. I wish the lines were hand drawn, I wish the creature's pose weren't so static, I wish that I couldn't tell that you just drew one eye and reversed it for the other one. I think there is potential. The wings are colored really nice. I want to see what your next one is like before I give you a total critique.